Thursday, June 3, 2010

Mirrors


Mirrors
for deda Yura

Ere more a rumor, roam my armory:
A memory a room -- amour et murs;
Miró, Marot, Marat, et Mérimée
Mirés aux mares, amarrés aux rameaux;
荒い海を洗う mains;
丸い мира 丸い耳;
Māori morae or Ameri-rhyme
И меряемый Реомюром ум...
Марая, я 守る mon royaume,
Mais мимо армии и Муаммары
Roam more--et même a mirror-room 終わる:    
Immer amèrement my merry rhyme,
Aurant un rhume, meurt en murmurant,
Et mort, もう生まれられる。
My rhymes, though mired in myriads of remoras,
Remain unmoored in macaronic murk:
Marrants, mignons--ou morts?  The modern Roma
Or mere mome raths, unmasterful ephemera,
Манимы мерным ветром метронома?
But never mind my murmured fears; смотри:
He mauri tā te reo that mirrors matter;
En marche, mots! maturing, ever madder;
Id a mi hermano con la madrugada
А к деду -- au midi de symmetrie
Во времени, où rient les heures et まだ
Ha du remords a near-immortal ember
В мерцаньи чьем я смастерю a smirk
For my moai sans âme ou airs: "remember?"

Explanation -- spoilers, if you are so inclined -- follow.

Ere more a rumor, roam my armory:
A memory a room -- amour et murs;
Miró, Marot, Marat et Mérimée

Mirés aux mares, amarrés aux rameaux;
Viewed in puddles, tied off to branches;
荒い海を洗う mains;
arai umi wo arau ...
Hands that wash dry seas;
丸い мира 丸い耳;
marui mira marui mimi
The round ears of a round world;
Māori morae or Ameri-rhyme

И меряемый Реомюром ум...
I merjaemyj Reomjurom um...
And a mind measured in Réaumur...
Марая, я 守る mon royaume,
maraja, ja mamoru ...
By scribbling, I protect my realm 
Mais мимо армии и Муаммары
... mimo armii i Muammary
But past, armies and Muammars  
Roam more--et même a mirror-room 終わる:
... owaru
... and even ... ends
Immer amèrement my merry rhyme,
Ever sorrowfully ...
Aurant un rhume, meurt en murmurant,

Down with a cold, dies murmuring
Et mort, もう生まれられる。
... mō umarerareru.
And once dead, may be reborn again.
My rhymes, though mired in myriads of remoras,
Remain unmoored in macaronic murk:
Marrants, mignons--ou morts?  The modern Roma
Funny, cute--or dead?
Or mere mome raths, unmasterful ephemera,

Манимы мерным ветром метронома?
Manimy mernym vetrom metronoma?
Beckoned by the smooth wind of the metronome? 
But never mind my murmured fears; смотри:
... smotri:
... look: 
He mauri tā te reo that mirrors matter;
The language has a spirit ...
En marche, mots! maturing, ever madder;

Forward, words! ...
Id a mi hermano con la madrugada

Come to my brother with the dawn
А к деду -- au midi de symmetrie
A k dedu ...
and to Grandfather at noon, a symmetry
Во времени, où rient les heures et まだ
Vo vremeni ... mada
in time, where hours laugh, and still 
Ha du remords a near-immortal ember
There's of remorse ...
В мерцаньи чьем я смастерю a smirk
V mercan'i č'em ja smasterju ...
In whose glimmering I'll cobble together ... 
For my moai sans âme ou airs: "remember?"

... without soul or expressions ...

On Māori: the only time I've heard it spoken was at the Polynesian Cultural Center on Oahu, during high school.  The word Aotearoa struck me with the way it was pronounced essentially in three syllables despite having six distinct vowels.  It seemed fitting, then, to parse such syllable-like entities as long syllables in a classical-style iamb.  Hence, Māori morae -- though I confess that I wrote that bit before realizing the elegant justification, and that a good portion of the poem was a slave to those two words.

Japanese, on the other hand, got one mora per syllable of meter, since that's how they like to write.

On transliteration: I struggled for a while trying to decide how to transliterate Russian, avoided the question for a bit by using IPA, decided that was unreasonable and switched to the standard library transliteration, which has the advantage of not being transparently phonetic.

1 comment:

  1. poems in 5(+?) languages ... catching up to Joyce ? for a second I read "and even ends end sorrowfully"

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